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Wednesday 29 April 2009

Create your own super story opening!

In Year 3, we have been writing super story openings. Here are some examples

"Don't you go wandering off at the corridors" warned Miss Rea as she was turning off the lights.
"No we won't we're just wondering over there" called Beth as she points over by the chairs.
Beth said "Come on Steth let's go outside the corridors"
"Ok then" whispered Steth.
by Angila 3G

"Don't go in the corridor" said Miss Winston fiercely as she turned off the lights. The children Kimberly and Amber said lightly "No we won't".
When the teacher turned off the lights they made a move.
by Amoy 3G

"I'm excited!," said David "This is my first sleep over."
"Yeah, but it is at the school," replied Tyron .
by Kany 3B

Have you ever slept late in school?
"Get your bags ready and brush your teeth," said Miss Preston " and don't snore too much!"
While everyone was asleep Nathan heard a noise from the classroom.
by Yamin 3B

"Don't go outside" whispered Mr Samson getting his work.
"No problem we're just going to read some books" sniggered Alex and Mirald.
"I think we have fooled him" said Alex. Alex pulled him but Mirald didn't move...
by Karan 3R

"Don't you two go out of the school" shouted the teacher while she was setting up the school sleepover.
"No we will not." called Jim as he opened the front door.
Then his best friend Queen whispered, " Jim the teacher shouted we should not go out of the school."
"Don 't be silly" whispered Jim as he went out.
by Gilda 3R

Can you do even better than these story openings? Leave your story opening in the comment section.

3 comments:

tyron3b said...

''i`m going to turn ur light`s out''said miss william.
tyron heard a noise tyron woke up tyron had a torch.
david,peter,kany,sydney,nathan,dylan,myleene,yamin,up.
we all creep down the corridor`s we see footprint`s on the floor the footprint was 7 inch`s tall & 7 inch`s wide.we went woo quiet.we followed the footprint`s it lead us to 6 green we looked in the window there was a 2 robber`s they was stealing the children`s work & mr bell`s desk then we went in 6 green`s classroom then the robber`s locked us in the classroom & they went out xx

harry said...

thats very intresting

tyron3b said...

"I'm going to your light out said sydney".Tyron heard a noise i got a torch.Tyron woke up sydney
"I heard a sydney said tyron".
Tyron & sydney creep down the corridor's we see footprint's on the floor it was 100 inch's tall & 100 inch's long.We heard something bang on the floor we moved the shadow moved fast we investigate around the corridor's.We looked in the i.c.t suite nothing was there then we looked in the staff room nothing was in that room.We looked in the office room nothing was there either.Suddenly we heard something in miss preston room the window was opened
"oh no we said".Next we looked in the classes nothing in 6 green,3 red,3 green,6 red,6 blue,4 blue all the classes except 3 blue we looked on the ceiling we see a dinosaur in william bellamy junior school.We "screamed"! everyone woke up everyone was talking everyone looked around on the floors,ceilings,walls everywhere finally they see in 3 blue classroom on the ceiling everyone went "ahhhhhhhh"!Everyone went crazy that they see the dinosaur in the school.