In Year 3, we have been writing super story openings. Here are some examples
"Don't you go wandering off at the corridors" warned Miss Rea as she was turning off the lights.
"No we won't we're just wondering over there" called Beth as she points over by the chairs.
Beth said "Come on Steth let's go outside the corridors"
"Ok then" whispered Steth.
by Angila 3G
"Don't go in the corridor" said Miss Winston fiercely as she turned off the lights. The children Kimberly and Amber said lightly "No we won't".
When the teacher turned off the lights they made a move.
by Amoy 3G
"I'm excited!," said David "This is my first sleep over."
"Yeah, but it is at the school," replied Tyron .
by Kany 3B
Have you ever slept late in school?
"Get your bags ready and brush your teeth," said Miss Preston " and don't snore too much!"
While everyone was asleep Nathan heard a noise from the classroom.
by Yamin 3B
"Don't go outside" whispered Mr Samson getting his work.
"No problem we're just going to read some books" sniggered Alex and Mirald.
"I think we have fooled him" said Alex. Alex pulled him but Mirald didn't move...
by Karan 3R
"Don't you two go out of the school" shouted the teacher while she was setting up the school sleepover.
"No we will not." called Jim as he opened the front door.
Then his best friend Queen whispered, " Jim the teacher shouted we should not go out of the school."
"Don 't be silly" whispered Jim as he went out.
by Gilda 3R
Can you do even better than these story openings? Leave your story opening in the comment section.
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